• I mostly just told my story. I didn't really show it.
• I told about people and the place that we were but I don't think that I used to much detail.
• I gave actual names to people and places but i didn't describe any taste or things like that very well.
• There really isn't a conflict in my story. The climatic event is mostly from when i get hurt. I don't really have any moral to the story and I basically stay the same person as i was before.
• I think that the story was pretty relevant to today because it was this past summer but I don't know how relevant it will be in the future.
• I don't think I did a very good job focusing on  main idea. I seem to jump around from place to place. My story is more like a journal entry then a narrative.
• The point of view is always in the authors.